EllaM's Feedback :)

After receiving our feedback we found that there were a few issues with our music video; one issue was that we didn’t have enough variety of dance moves, it was a little repetitive. Watching the our music video back I can understand where they are coming from, for we could of created more dance moves so there was less repetition. Although this would have been a little difficult for we were creating a storyline alongside the dancing, we didn’t want too much to be going on and confuse our audience.  

Another issue raised was amount of effects we used (disco light effects), potentially there could have been less but we wanted to make sure that our music video fitted to our dance genre. If we were to do it all again we would take this into account and use less. For after all our audience is who we are making it for. 

Finally, the last issue was the length of our last section. It involved one of our actors dancing seductively down the camera, this was the section in the song where it dropped in tempo and slowed down. Our audience thought that we could have cut it down because the lengths of these shots were too long. Looking back we can see how we could of cut this section down and still being over the three minute minimum for the music video. We have taken all the feedback into account and we now know where we made mistakes.